Hey God, if your ever wake up from your eternal sleep
Please don't look this way ,
We are not ready yet for you to evaluate
The world you left us seemed too big
So we made thousand partitions
And fought many wars in the name of peace
All that we need was without any price
But we did not want things for free
And bargained freedom in death for a life spent in slavery
You thought we will learn to coexist
But equality of life was passe
So we fought with each other to see who is fit to live
You created a world without any fallacy
But it was not fun to live in a world without any lies
We created our own illussions and made mockery of life
You made us mortal so that we can seize each moment
But we believed in saying nay
And just survived long enough to die anoter day
Your final gift was the ability to love
But we thought it as a mere weakness
And now we just hate to love and love to hate
You will be sorry to see what we have become
So Please don't look this way
We have not evloved yet and are far from being perfect
Excellent work and selection of words is beautiful...
ReplyDeleteNice to read.. thanks
ReplyDeleteGood one PPD...keep it up..
ReplyDeletewow! this is the best thought i have ever read!
ReplyDeleteeach & every line very truthful..... beautiful poem i enjoyed it :)
keep writing & smiling :)
CONGRATS ON GETTING SELECTED FOR THE EDITOR'S CHOICE!!! I knew this poem deserved a place in my recommendation list!
ReplyDeleteVery very beautiful Piyush, very meaningful..very deep....
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