Friday, August 12, 2011

Hey God , don't look this way


Hey God,  if your ever wake up from your eternal sleep
Please don't look this way ,
We are not ready yet for you to evaluate


The world you left us seemed too big
So we made thousand partitions
And fought many wars in the name of peace

All that we need was without any price
But we did not want things for free
And bargained freedom in death for a life spent in slavery

You thought we will learn to coexist
But equality of life was passe
So we fought with each other to see who is fit to live

You created a world without any fallacy
But it was not fun to live in a world without any lies
We created our own illussions and made mockery of life

You made us mortal so that we can seize each moment
But we believed in saying nay
And just survived long enough to die anoter day

Your final gift was the ability to love
But we thought it as a mere weakness
And now we just hate to love and love to hate

You will be sorry to see what we have become
So Please don't look this way
We have not evloved yet and are far from being perfect

6 comments:

  1. Excellent work and selection of words is beautiful...

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  2. wow! this is the best thought i have ever read!
    each & every line very truthful..... beautiful poem i enjoyed it :)
    keep writing & smiling :)

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  3. CONGRATS ON GETTING SELECTED FOR THE EDITOR'S CHOICE!!! I knew this poem deserved a place in my recommendation list!

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  4. Very very beautiful Piyush, very meaningful..very deep....

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